Full Moon Poem by Amit Shankar Saha

Full Moon

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Yesternight in Morpheus' cloak
I stole into a child's sweet dream,
Where through the haze of purging smoke
I saw the dream-world in full gleam.

Tonight I gaze at the full moon
And wait for the sun to shine soon,
I'll sail against the winds of time
In the waning moon's fortnight clime.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patrick A. Martin 06 November 2009

Very beautiful! It's a bedtime story and a mystical dream. Yes I like iy very much-10

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Carol Gall 06 November 2009

very lovely and magical 10

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Marieta Maglas 09 November 2009

nice descriptive poem, wonderful rhymes, lovely to read.10

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Patti Masterman 07 November 2009

Loved the Morpheus cloak line. It's marvelous with a wonderful writing style.

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Brishti Mazumdar 06 November 2009

Amit, I am sure that it is not your first poem...may be, it is your first step here....And so nice it is....I congratulate you for your thought process.....Wish you a very august journey....

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Lady Grace 06 November 2009

this is introducing ha since this is your first poem..this is nice dear, , this first poem is the first proof that u could be a good poet...cheers dear....add more...WELCOME TO PH...wait...i guess u have some friends here, someone is inviting me for this nice poem of yours...to your friend who invited me, ...thanks dear...naizz

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Kesav Easwaran 06 November 2009

nice poem...the verbal imageries there are surprisingly attractive...thanks...10

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