La Que Escribe Poesia

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Funny - Poem by La Que Escribe Poesia

Funny you should say,
That the world is spining,
Funny you should say,
That Manchester is winning.

Funny you should say,
That time flies fast,
Funny you should say,
That's all in the past.

Funny you should say,
That death is dawning near,
Funny you should say,
He turned a deaf ear.

Funny you should say,
That life is full of honey,
But for that you need money,
Hmmm... funny.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

I don't know if it makes sense. But comment anyway... Love to read what you think!

Comments about Funny by La Que Escribe Poesia

  • Rookie Anubhav Sharma (8/28/2013 1:54:00 PM)

    Still better than much other poems written on funny....rhyming scheme is good... i like it.... good job (Report) Reply

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  • Bronze Star - 2,822 Points Hans Vr (10/26/2012 9:41:00 PM)

    The world is not too logical, at least not yet
    A lot of the strange things may change of more of us start to practice random acts of kindness
    Somewhere deep inside, I believe, as a consequence of close observation, that the world is
    changing faster than ever for the better. This view is heavily contradicted by mass media who
    report lopsided news that is sensationalised
    As long as news is connected to financial gains, no one will care too much about reporting the truth
    Maybe I am in the process of writing some funny comments on this poem
    but the main message is: kindness is on the increase and once we reach the sharp bent of the exponential curve it will change the world in a very thorough way. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 136 Points Romeo Della Valle (10/13/2012 9:39:00 PM)

    Impressive and thought provoking! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Romeo-NYC http: //www.romeodellavalle.com (My Visual Poetry webpage) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points $arah Pillai (10/12/2012 8:29:00 AM)

    awesome! it's...funny... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 24 Points Yoonoos Peerbocus (10/12/2012 6:33:00 AM)

    the end rhyme...near.ear-money/honey-raises the fun sound of the poem /nice (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 12, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, October 12, 2012


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