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Funny - Poem by La Que Escribe Poesia

Funny you should say,
That the world is spining,
Funny you should say,
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I don't know if it makes sense. But comment anyway... Love to read what you think!

Comments about Funny by La Que Escribe Poesia

  • Rookie Anubhav Sharma (8/28/2013 1:54:00 PM)

    Still better than much other poems written on funny....rhyming scheme is good... i like it.... good job (Report) Reply

    10 person liked.
    6 person did not like.
  • Silver Star - 3,166 Points Hans Vr (10/26/2012 9:41:00 PM)

    The world is not too logical, at least not yet
    A lot of the strange things may change of more of us start to practice random acts of kindness
    Somewhere deep inside, I believe, as a consequence of close observation, that the world is
    changing faster than ever for the better. This view is heavily contradicted by mass media who
    report lopsided news that is sensationalised
    As long as news is connected to financial gains, no one will care too much about reporting the truth
    Maybe I am in the process of writing some funny comments on this poem
    but the main message is: kindness is on the increase and once we reach the sharp bent of the exponential curve it will change the world in a very thorough way. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 139 Points Romeo Della Valle (10/13/2012 9:39:00 PM)

    Impressive and thought provoking! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Romeo-NYC http: //www.romeodellavalle.com (My Visual Poetry webpage) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points $arah Pillai (10/12/2012 8:29:00 AM)

    awesome! it's...funny... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 24 Points Yoonoos Peerbocus (10/12/2012 6:33:00 AM)

    the end rhyme...near.ear-money/honey-raises the fun sound of the poem /nice (Report) Reply








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