Funny Poem by dun one

Funny

Rating: 5.0


Funny how thats all I needed
To get out the door yet not stray so far

To let the sole touch the cobblestone taking it a step at a time
Funny how thats all I needed
When I wandered to far off things for ages

When I saw myself from a far
When parts of me died
Funny how all I need was to step outside

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Felix Walne 12 September 2009

another great piece

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Smiley Hooker 28 July 2009

Yes, it is funny, but why linger on sadness...it's alright to see the world, anything could happen in a second and a step will always makes a difference. Meaningful write, well done! :)

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