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Funny - Poem by dun one

Funny how thats all I needed
To get out the door yet not stray so far

To let the sole touch the cobblestone taking it a step at a time
Funny how thats all I needed
When I wandered to far off things for ages

When I saw myself from a far
When parts of me died
Funny how all I need was to step outside

Comments about Funny by dun one

  • Rookie Felix Walne (9/12/2009 10:28:00 AM)

    another great piece (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Smiley Hooker (7/28/2009 8:34:00 PM)

    Yes, it is funny, but why linger on sadness...it's alright to see the world, anything could happen in a second and a step will always makes a difference. Meaningful write, well done! :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 15, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, June 20, 2011

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