.........Funny Song......... Poem by Neela Nath Das

.........Funny Song.........

Rating: 5.0


If you meet me.
You won't love dear,
I have a stick,
which may arise fear.
I'm at the threshold
where B.P remains high.
for untimely excitement,
anytime I may die.
Your blood is young,
Your heart is fresh,
if you touch me
you will make a mess.
My body is tattered,
full of patchwork.
Love has jumped out,
from my old old bark.
Don't meet me,
Don't say word amorous,
At this point of life,
this is sheer farce!

Saturday, April 19, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuy Amante 19 April 2014

You are a silly young nature watcher Drive to the bar, get a man and be a debaucher! Make that tired blood turn into brandy, might buy you 20 yrs, could be real handy!

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Captain Herbert Poetry 27 April 2014

Very inspiring and interesting to read

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Tanya Gupta 24 April 2014

hah..hah..hah.. what a lovely write, enjoyed a lot. please come and read my poems and gve me your veiws

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Sekharan Pookkat 23 April 2014

Your body may be old but your thoughts are young and inspiring

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Neela Nath Das 21 April 2014

Thomas, thanks for picking up the humor of this write!

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Neela Nath Das 19 April 2014

Ha ha F.B.Thanks for your advice! Amazing prompt poem from a promising poet's pen.

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