Games Poem by Aron Blesch

Games

Rating: 3.5


''How can you say that? ''
''What do you mean? ''

''You know what I mean.''
''No, I don't.''

''You're insenstive.''
''And you're critical.''

''No, I'm not.''
''Yes, you are.''

''Shut up! ''
''Let me kiss you.''

Thursday, March 15, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: relationships
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Smith 21 March 2007

This gave me a giggle... interesting style you have... Alison

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Joseph Dunn 07 March 2018

Great poem. I really like the ending, how you tie it all in.

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Cece Lamberts 22 April 2007

Sounds like common miscommunication between couples. Everybody wants to have the last word. Maybe a kiss can correct all that. You put it really nicely, I like it! CeCe

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Ivor Hogg 22 March 2007

Real communication and the correct use for lips

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Rajaram Ramachandran 21 March 2007

What a shock at the end of the poem!

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Charles M Moore 21 March 2007

Like the idea of this, The ending is perfect, and a wonderful way to shut someone up.

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Aron Blesch

Aron Blesch

Utica, New York
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