Hazel Durham


Garden Of Eden - Poem by Hazel Durham

Sunbeams, with bundles of fun,
Shining, shimmering green quest,
A new nest, in garden of eden's best,
My soul is calm here, even with all, my unsung fears,
Laughter united, like a torchlight showing, how bright it is along this merry way,
Moments of freedom, in abundance every day,
Life is a serenade, with no time to ever fade.



Forever young, riding horses along leafy country lane's,
The intoxicating fertile earth, blending with my deep emotions,
Love is shouting here from the fields, every tree, every dazzling mountain view,
My heart sings a never-ending haunting tune,
My soul rejoicing in the exquisite splendour,
Soaring like a golden eagle, to heights unknown,
I never want to say goodbye, to finding truth at last,
That ain't no lie.



My character is formed here, a lively, bright girl,
Finding new friends, finding me, a new pearl,
Surprise, is everyone loves, how funny I am,
Like a toast of champagne, nothing ever stays the same,
Thank you, for letting the sadness and conflict cease,
Love has been found, so beautifully bound,
I have passed life's test,
In the magnificence of the garden of eden's best.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Memories of a time and place that I discovered a new life, a new me, and love was all around me!

Comments about Garden Of Eden by Hazel Durham

  • Gold Star - 39,017 Points Akhtar Jawad (8/8/2015 10:11:00 PM)

    I have passed life's test,
    In the magnificence of the garden of eden's best.
    Beautiful. (Report) Reply

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  • Bronze Star - 2,773 Points Anthony Di''anno (9/25/2013 9:59:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem Hazel. It sounds like an incredibly joyful time. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,109 Points Heather Wilkins (6/21/2013 1:37:00 PM)

    congratulations on the garden of eden, love this poem (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 524 Points Vizard Dhawan (4/5/2013 8:50:00 AM)

    vibrant and energetic poem, , , only one word..WOW.. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,295 Points Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (3/28/2013 4:18:00 PM)

    Oh must have been a special place and a special indeed.But I think everyone to some degree has a glimsp of paradise at one time in their life... though your's was perhaps a wee bit better than most.
    Thanks Hazel this poem sort of made my day. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 497 Points Sanjibsaha Aniketa (12/22/2012 5:04:00 AM)

    'Life is a serenade' ...' love is found'.... ' I have passed the life's test ' ... more & more - So positive that can inspire everyone. Very good poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 23,434 Points Sandra Feldman (12/21/2012 10:47:00 PM)

    Wow, you found the Garden of Eden, Congratulations, what a beautiful and poetic way to let All know. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,972 Points Clarence Prince (12/21/2012 10:37:00 AM)

    A real lovely poem in its entirety, nonetheless, it's the last verse, which grabs me best! Thanks for sharing, Hazel! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,068 Points Kanav Justa (12/20/2012 6:01:00 AM)

    So much of positive energy i felt after reading this.... a great write (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,068 Points Kanav Justa (12/20/2012 6:01:00 AM)

    So much of positive energy i felt after reading this.... a great write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Israel Ugwu (12/19/2012 1:39:00 PM)

    What's the poem all about? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Owain Glyn (12/12/2012 6:40:00 AM)

    Vibrant, excitable and very, very good! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie April Swan (my Diary Of Bitterweet Chocolate) (12/4/2012 1:15:00 PM)

    I love the charisma expressed in this poem. It has a wonderful vibe to it. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 613 Points Nasarudheen Parameswaran (11/27/2012 6:55:00 AM)

    A fine poem of positive energy. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jais Mani (11/26/2012 9:00:00 AM)

    the magical simplicity f the poem and its tuneful music greatly add to its charm.....i super liked ur poem (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,063 Points Neela Nath Das (11/25/2012 7:53:00 AM)

    So soothing are your diction! They took my cares away. Very lovely. Kudos! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,057 Points Sayeed Abubakar (11/20/2012 5:12:00 AM)

    Love is shouting here from the fields, every tree, every dazzling mountain view,
    My heart sings a never-ending haunting tune- Excelent lines. Unforgetable. Dangerous imagery. Keep it up. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Asif Andalib (11/18/2012 10:55:00 PM)

    Beautiful imagery and metaphors and great flow of words and emotions. I really enjoyed your wonderful write (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,536 Points Hans Vr (11/18/2012 8:46:00 AM)

    Wonderful optimism and positive thinking in this very well written poem
    Excellent work (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 18, 2012



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