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(05 dec 1980 / cochin, kerala state, india)

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GARDEN OF FIVE SENSES

Early morning.
When the birds sing,
I hear you.

When the flowers bloom,
I see you.
When the suns rays embrace,
I feel you.

Fragrance the wind brings,
I smell you.
And the bees whisper,
As you do.

“I love you too”
My garden of five senses
It’s..…………..

You
You
You
You
And
Only you.

Submitted: Sunday, February 04, 2007
Edited: Saturday, January 08, 2011


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  • Gone with the wind (7/31/2008 7:29:00 AM)

    This was a very beautiful piece..cultivating love and care

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  • Ernestine Northover (2/24/2007 12:18:00 PM)

    Haven't forgotten you Jibin, just haven't been around much for a while due to packing to move house.
    This is a starry-eyed poem. Such a pleasure to read, amorous and tender in its words. Very well presented too. I liked it a a lot.
    Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

  • Sara Crandall (2/5/2007 11:20:00 AM)

    Wonderful, joseph. I like it alot. A touching love poem, expressing only what the five senses should have been made for.......love.

  • Qais Shah (2/5/2007 10:57:00 AM)

    Psychosomatic Syndrome would be thrilling title for this poem...

  • Mary Das (2/5/2007 7:48:00 AM)

    Garden of five senses is very unique. So much is said and it's lovely.

  • Lipstick Casanova (2/5/2007 3:11:00 AM)

    What a wonderful garden you paint, Jibin. I'm awestruck because you are able to express so much in so few words, and it's still entirely passionate and warm. The way you've summed up love by the person being everywhere is genius. This would have been the Ultimate Romantic's Love Note. Delicious.

    -L.C.

  • Sam Dragon (2/4/2007 9:05:00 PM)

    Beautiful, and so sweet, that persons lucky!

  • Sandra Fowler (2/4/2007 7:39:00 PM)

    Spare, elegant and very effective. Wonderful work, Jibin.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra

  • Rajaram Ramachandran (2/4/2007 7:37:00 PM)

    Mysic flows well in your poem-short and sweet

  • Peter A. Crowther (2/4/2007 1:00:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem of great charm and delicacy

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