Treasure Island

jibin joseph

(05 dec 1980 / cochin, kerala state, india)

GARDEN OF FIVE SENSES


Early morning.
When the birds sing,
I hear you.

When the flowers bloom,
I see you.
When the suns rays embrace,
I feel you.

Fragrance the wind brings,
I smell you.
And the bees whisper,
As you do.

“I love you too”
My garden of five senses
It’s..…………..

You
You
You
You
And
Only you.

Submitted: Sunday, February 04, 2007
Edited: Saturday, January 08, 2011

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  • Ernestine Northover (2/24/2007 12:18:00 PM)

    Haven't forgotten you Jibin, just haven't been around much for a while due to packing to move house.
    This is a starry-eyed poem. Such a pleasure to read, amorous and tender in its words. Very well presented too. I liked it a a lot.
    Love and hugs Ernestine XXX (Report) Reply

  • Sara Crandall (2/5/2007 11:20:00 AM)

    Wonderful, joseph. I like it alot. A touching love poem, expressing only what the five senses should have been made for.......love. (Report) Reply

  • Mary Das (2/5/2007 7:48:00 AM)

    Garden of five senses is very unique. So much is said and it's lovely. (Report) Reply

  • Lipstick Casanova (2/5/2007 3:11:00 AM)

    What a wonderful garden you paint, Jibin. I'm awestruck because you are able to express so much in so few words, and it's still entirely passionate and warm. The way you've summed up love by the person being everywhere is genius. This would have been the Ultimate Romantic's Love Note. Delicious.

    -L.C. (Report) Reply

  • Raghavan Warrier (2/4/2007 12:23:00 PM)

    This is superb poem written with intensity of passion and maintained throughout the poem. Wise use of few words to great effect. (Report) Reply

  • Esther Leclerc (2/4/2007 10:59:00 AM)

    Ever so romantic, gentle... the imagery calls to the soul of the nature lover. I love this. Esther : ] (Report) Reply

  • Preeti - is here! (2/4/2007 10:49:00 AM)

    Garden of 5 senses...this one smells good, looks great, tastes divine, feels lovely and most of all rings musically in my ears!

    Superb! (Report) Reply

  • Tom Green (2/4/2007 10:37:00 AM)

    That poem is really beautiful. Your poetry just gets better!
    Keep writing! (Report) Reply

  • Prasanna Kumari (2/4/2007 10:29:00 AM)

    i feel the breeze of love caressing me in a garden full of flowers...really beautiful poem...with very few words you can express so wonderfully well.... (Report) Reply

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