Garden Spice Poem by Jim French

Garden Spice

Rating: 5.0


There a place at the back,
My little oasis,
My place to absorb by candle,
Wind in the leaves,
Words on the page,
Ripples In the water.

My oasis tends me,
As I tend it,
I breathe it in,
as the plants need the sun rays,
my oasis is,
like my garden spice,
like the rays of many suns.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fay Slimm 05 April 2009

I like the slow presentation of this piece Jim - it has the feel of an oasis in the reading - and the imagery used aids in this too - a very good verse... 10

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Janice M Pickett 04 April 2009

Again that gentle good person shows through here. Your sensitive nature so special and so wonderful.

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Jim Norausky 22 February 2009

Enjoyable reading this poem about your special place that brings you joy. Well penned. Jim

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Patti Masterman 03 February 2009

I like the feeling this gives, of a secret hideaway, and of spices made by rays from the sun. 'Wind in the leaves, Words on the page' is lovely. It seems just right somehow.

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