Gee! In The Woods, Bulbuls And Orioles Fly (Limerick-14) Poem by Harindhar Reddy

Gee! In The Woods, Bulbuls And Orioles Fly (Limerick-14)

Rating: 4.7


Cluster of stars are blinking in the sky,
I can see blue, red and gold if I lie;
Myriad of heavenly sent lotus
Haloes in creek, Just focus
In the woods - bulbuls and Orioles fly.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 26 March 2012

this is a truly fantastic poem, a fantastic write.

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Harindhar Reddy 20 May 2020

I'm honoured by a fantastic review on the poem ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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Adeline Foster 21 March 2012

This makes a lovely poem. But, sorry, it is not a Limerick. The number of syllables in each line are too many. The syllables must be 9,9,5,5,9. This structure is non- negotiable for a limerick. It is, however, a good poem. Adeline

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Harindhar Reddy 20 May 2020

Thank you for such a beautiful comment on the poem ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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