Gemma's Bar Poem by Louise Marie DelSanto

Gemma's Bar

Rating: 3.9


Around the corner by the place we called
Silverlake, and down from the Cold Cut joint
where sausages hung in the window, Gemma's
swinging door was a Saturday pleasure.

How many times did I hear my father call
my mother to say he would be at Gemmas,
would she please be ready to go out at five.
'Gabby and I are having a few.'

Gabby looked like an old Clark Gable,
boasting of his one long pinky fingernail,
taking down the CC like water, his slicked
back grey hair a tribute to his lifestyle.

A beer, a shotglass of something strong, a game
of cards, someone to hear what no one would listen
to unless he was drunk, and staring at a sign of a young
Betty Grable framed on the wall.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cj Heck 17 December 2005

I'm astounded by the low rating on this poem. It's a wonderful poem and a joy to read. Your words are woven through each line to create a story that held me from the first line to the last. Well done, Louise. Warmest regards and respect, CJ

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