(March 2,1960 / Davao City, Philippines)

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Getting Better

As the time goes by
All things aged
The seed is full-grown
Into a tree

The bud of innocence
Comes to maturity
Like the bond share
Turns better each day

We have had confusions
But we were young then
Now is the chance for life
To know each other

Life has come to prime
So let us do
To strengthen the tie
So it won't get lose

We must take the balance
By using the common sense
Least we find the score
And draw the line

To give and take
Is the secret ingredient
To cook the pie
To it's best

Married or not
For as long as together
Couple in love is better
Than bitter love in couple

Submitted: Sunday, January 18, 2009
Edited: Tuesday, March 03, 2009


Comments about this poem (Getting Better by Marvin Brato Sr )

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  • Anjali Sinha (2/1/2009 10:28:00 PM)

    'Married or not
    For as long as together
    Couple in love is better
    Than bitter love in couple '
    perfect sense in what you say
    ++++++++10 anjali

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  • Maxislam Beauty (1/19/2009 4:15:00 AM)

    This is a very fine piece and great lovely writing, making lot's of sense.

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