Konjit Berhane

Rookie (SePTeMBer,18 1983 DEath i Believe i am ImMorTal / a S M a R a)

Getting Brighter - Poem by Konjit Berhane

The liar
With great desire
To have a hair
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Comments about Getting Brighter by Konjit Berhane

  • Rookie Joseph Daly (11/18/2005 11:32:00 AM)


    I like this, I think it lacks maudilinity (if that's a word) . Well set out, with a sort of strange feeling of optimism. I cant quite expand on that just yet.


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  • Rookie - 133 Points Sidi Mahtrow (11/15/2005 2:39:00 PM)

    You've got a nice touch, but how about putting some smiles in your poetry. Watch the sun rise, not set!

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,213 Points Uriah Hamilton (7/28/2005 6:04:00 AM)

    Please tell me this poem is not true! the part about you having cancer! the part about seeing the bright side of life, I hope will be true of everyone. (Report) Reply

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