Ghost Whispers Poem by Dulakshi Wakista

Ghost Whispers

Rating: 3.5


Oh! night arrived
At black midnight
The leaves fluttered and
The trees quivered
The wind blew with rage
Birds shrieked and shrieked.....
Thunder there was on high
White and crimson fires
Lurking, looming far away...
It was a dismal darkest day
Heavy rain gulped the nature
Oh! I bewildered
Alone I was at home
Suddenly, the light failed
Doomed-I!
Lit a candle
The clock struck twelve.....
Through the window I peeped
The bamboo bushes rustling
At once I stared
A feeling of fancy seized me
The scamper foot steps approaching
Flabbergasted!
Ghost haunted infront of me
I petrified...

Dulakshi Wakista Copyright 2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 17 June 2009

From melancholy to horrified arena where the shadows of the undeath unleash their horcus porcus, we stood still, whisper to each other, like the ghost whispers.Great writes Dulakshi! !

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Shashendra Amalshan 20 June 2009

hello dulakshi! ! ! hey this is a superb write indeed...great expressions... and i sort of a like thriller stuff! ! ..and this one is great! ! ! .....you can writing is excellent.... enjoyed this very much, thannks! ! ! 10+++ regards shan

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Joanna Ratnam 18 September 2009

Hi! Dulakshi, Superb creation of atmosphere in the opening lines and yes! you had me pertrified, too! :)) Joanna

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Pamela Lutwyche 12 February 2010

That sounds one spooky night.

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Allemagne Roßmann 14 February 2010

The scamper foot steps approaching Flabbergasted! Very poignant write...

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Prashant Shaurya 05 April 2010

a beautiful lyrical poem with such brilliant and vibrant imagery.. it seemed as if i was doing some kind of picture reading..

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Hasini Lelwala 04 April 2010

i enjoyed this a lot....i love this poem a lot my sis................

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Marie Bliss 04 April 2010

This poem has magic, I love it! Well done!

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Sandra Fowler 06 March 2010

Very dramatic. Whispers is a word that was made for poetry.10+. Always your friend, Sandra

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Iron Panda 23™ 24 February 2010

I FRIFFIN LOVED IT! ! the image was soo clear in my head...and it was soo mysterious! !

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