Ghostly Boats Poem by Ray Quesada

Ghostly Boats

Rating: 4.5


We're mostly ghostly boats with notions
Deranged, we strangely sail the oceans
Our sails prevail
On whisp ad instinct
To save our tails
And not let the ship sink

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sacha Hayes O'grady 13 August 2013

I wish this poem had been longer, such is its sad sentiment. An all too brief evocation of trial and tribulation.

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