Lyn Paul

Gold Star - 12,208 Points (17.03.1965)

Gift Of Giving - Poem by Lyn Paul

Open your eyes
Open your heart
Give just a little
You will get such alot
Let the sunshine in
Even when there is rain
The warmth of your heart
Will warm someone elses
Two hands are better than one
One opened heart
Will welcome two warm hands
Open your heart
Love is not just romance
Love is... loving who you are
To love life
To love to give
Our journey in life
Is to open those eyes
Feel the beauty in your heart
Give the gift
The gift of giving



Copyright Reserved May 2014
LYN PAUL

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Comments about Gift Of Giving by Lyn Paul

  • Silver Star - 3,622 Points Ken E Hall (5/25/2015 4:45:00 AM)

    Very warm welcome words uplifting message indeed the gift of giving is sure needed in poorer lands we Ozzie's sure give lots and so we should...thanks for the gift of giving...regards (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 7,720 Points Neela Nath (12/16/2014 1:07:00 AM)

    Open your eyes
    Open your heart
    Give just a little
    You will get such alot
    Let the sunshine in
    Even when there is rain
    The warmth of your heart
    Will warm someone elses- - - -So fantastic lines.Not for us only we live, we live for others too. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 60 Points Amitie Moto Wa Abedi (8/14/2014 6:22:00 PM)

    woow this poem is really amazing. it is teaching, so touching and inspiring. Well done Lyn. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 42 Points Adheez Van Der Beanthz (7/30/2013 10:02:00 AM)

    Love is not just romance
    Love is... loving who you are
    To love life
    To love to give.. love these lines
    by giving, we share happiness, beauty and even sadness
    live feels easier if we share it with others
    read your poem reminds me of the words of the past, togetherness is our breath
    yeah, togetherness is our breath in life and giving is one way to keep our breath to stay and always alive (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,642 Points Bri Edwards (7/29/2013 11:45:00 PM)

    oh! i forgot to offer a light-hearted poem i wrote entitled FUN-eral. i offer it here since lyn paul was/is in the funeral business. ;) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,642 Points Bri Edwards (7/29/2013 11:39:00 PM)

    thank you for your gift. i have read some of the comments. yes, a lot of people have said it is better to give than receive. why? some people don't have as much to give or just don't have the personality to feel like giving. it doesn't make them inferior to the givers.
    i give some money and time to people or organizations i feel deserve my help. it DOES make me feel good/useful/meaningful. it is a way of making myself feel better about the time i spend on this earth. so we givers could at times be called selfish, but if wanting to feel self worth is selfish, then i am proud to call myself selfish! and it is NICE if the one who receives can be gracious (see definition #1 below) about it, but
    if they are not gracious [especially if they did not ASK to receive] then the giver has the option of not giving more. i know that i enjoy BOTH giving and receiving on poemhunter. :)

    gra·cious
    'graSH?s
    adjective
    adjective: gracious

    1.
    courteous, kind, and pleasant.
    smiling and gracious in defeat
    synonyms: courteous, polite, civil, chivalrous, well-mannered, mannerly, decorous; More
    tactful, diplomatic;
    kind, benevolent, considerate, thoughtful, obliging, accommodating, indulgent, magnanimous;
    friendly, amiable, cordial, hospitable
    a gracious hostess
    antonyms: rude
    elegant and tasteful, esp. as exhibiting wealth or high social status.
    the British painter specialized in gracious Victorian interiors
    synonyms: elegant, stylish, tasteful, graceful; More
    comfortable, luxurious, sumptuous, opulent, grand, high-class;
    informalswanky, plush
    gracious colonial buildings
    antonyms: shabby, crude
    2.
    (in Christian belief) showing divine grace. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 347 Points David Wood (7/26/2013 5:39:00 AM)

    And you have so much to give with your poetry. A lovely poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,063 Points Heather Wilkins (7/24/2013 6:23:00 PM)

    it is better to give than receive. many blessings flow from giving. love this write (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,906 Points Khairul Ahsan (7/24/2013 5:14:00 PM)

    Give the gift
    The gift of giving
    Such a nice call! I've liked this poem very much, words of love coming out from a pure heart.
    I've also liked most of the comments here, a deep understanding of other poetic minds of your thoughts. The last line of Lucifera Santez is simply wonderful and I believe many of our minds have been spoken here. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 38 Points Lucifera Santez (7/24/2013 10:40:00 AM)

    give the gift
    the gift of giving.
    thoughtful lines.
    love is complicated, you have simplified it here.
    :) (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,699 Points Anthony Di''anno (7/24/2013 9:34:00 AM)

    The gift of giving is given to all superstitious or not. It is a gift we can all share should we be brave enough to do so. A lovely poem Lyn :) (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,924 Points Kanniappan Kanniappan (7/23/2013 8:18:00 PM)

    The gift of giving is a blessing from God.
    We have real stories about kings in Tamil nadu
    like Seethakkaathi whoo gifted after death,
    Kumanan gifted after exile to forest and
    Karnan who gifted in his death bed - the benefits of gift he obtained. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,344 Points Ramesh Rai (7/23/2013 7:44:00 PM)

    To love life
    To love to give
    Our journey in life
    Is to open those eyes
    Feel the beauty in your heart
    Give the gift
    The gift of giving
    a grt msg. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 347 Points David Wood (7/23/2013 5:17:00 AM)

    This is a lovely honest message to all your readers. A good write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 432 Points Danny Draper (7/23/2013 1:33:00 AM)

    A great message and the spirit of honest and genuine character. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chandana Khan (7/21/2013 9:45:00 PM)

    i am exactly going with you in the thoughts.
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  • Veteran Poet - 1,924 Points Kanniappan Kanniappan (7/21/2013 9:15:00 PM)

    The gift of giving is a pleasure which made you addict to give again and again. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 25,038 Points Valsa George (7/21/2013 10:47:00 AM)

    'Feel the beauty in your heart..... Find pleasure in the gift of giving! Great Message expressed through a beautiful poem! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,691 Points Valerie Dohren (7/21/2013 8:19:00 AM)

    It is better to give than to receive, but we should receive graciously otherwise the giving loses its value. A great sentiment Lyn, encapsulated within a lovely poem. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,269 Points Unwritten Soul (7/21/2013 6:32:00 AM)

    Agree with you Lyn, giving what we have not mean we lost what we had, it just we sharing with others, even we have what they give...as much care, love, kindness if we give we never lose it, they will have give it too...it just doubling instead :) . lovely write_Soul (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, July 19, 2013

Poem Edited: Sunday, May 17, 2015


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