Gingerly Poem by d.j. nanu

Gingerly



Let me paint your face
for i do not recognize you by your features
let me paint your face
for i do not want to see
the resemblance of my scars in you
let me paint your face
in darkest of colors
and turn you in to a shadow
for shadows never leave
they always come back
sooner or later! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Spencer Smith 08 November 2012

Great job, you should edit it though, just general feedback. Correct the capitalization, and some punctuation. Great poem though

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