Girlfriend From Hungary....[ Inspired By A Message From Crayon Poet; Humorous? ; Very Short; Food ] Poem by Bri Edwards

Girlfriend From Hungary....[ Inspired By A Message From Crayon Poet; Humorous? ; Very Short; Food ]

Rating: 5.0


I once had a gal from Hungary,
but she always made me hungry.
So I ate all of her, ...including ALL of her fat,
and then, in my dining room, alone [AGAIN] I sat!

(August 15,2018)

Wednesday, August 15, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: food,humorous,love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
if you like this poem, there MUST be something "WRONG" with YOU! ! !

bri;)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 15 August 2018

I am so in the head that I liked this.: -) I like Mexican. Indian, ...... Mmmm

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Valsa George 23 August 2018

I think something has gone wrong with me! I like this poem as I know you're always hungry!

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Mj Lemon 03 September 2018

Horror and comedy....so well blended, Bri. The last line does make clear why you ruled out Hungary Girlfriend as a title option.

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Nika Mcguin 29 August 2018

This is kind of scary lol but funny as well. I wonder if girls from Hungary have an irrational fear of encountering cannibals? I couldn't blame them after this poem lol. Unfortunately this reminds me of an eerie documentary I watched about a Japanese cannibal who ate a girl he had a crush on - literally.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 28 August 2018

My goodness! What a poem! You dated a girl from Hungary? Then became hungry? Ate all of her and then, sat all alone in the dinning room! ! ! ! Ha ha ha ha ha Bri, you are a limit.....

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 August 2018

I appreciate the comment of poetess Valsa George. This is a beautiful poem on humor and love having nice inscriptions.10

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Paul Brookes 23 August 2018

clever and banquet of sorts all for sake of an A as usual a cryptic review

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