Girls Poem by David DeSantis
Girls
It has suddenly become clear to me
That all women lack some honesty
In their glance
is a bigotry
Most superficial
by decree
You see:
A woman thinks with emotion
With the heart of an open ocean
Filled with warmth and some despair
Happiness and minor care
Where tides can change so quickly
Like a deep tsunami upon the sea
Swallowed whole if not with guide
A man must sometimes forget his pride
And remember most logically
That a woman lives on irregularity
Because if you should not take heed
Then I promise you alone shall be.
So when in pain you find this cancer,
then perhaps seek one more answer,
A tall, thin, dress less standard,
Forget the girlfriend
buy an exotic dancer.
Copyright (c) David DeSantis
dear david, this line is unique With the heart of an open ocean strangely the poem sounds like a dialogue.
Girls don't change easily their ideas. Sometimes their way of espressing themselves is very various. Their..their..it's better to share something more with women and so to use the adjective: our.
although I personally disagree, this was an amazing poem. An absolute 10/10 Ps. Maybe your just going for the wrong type of women
ha ha... think you got us all figured out hey.... either way you will pay :) I like the tsunami line - enjoy the ride!
Eh, what are you going to do? Everybody is a cliche, no? And men and women are opposites, some would argue compliments. Anyway, it was honest and it was clean cut so I liked it.
Oh I bet the women just love you for this one. I have rarely seen a greater condemnation. GW62
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/24/2024 3:05:27 AM # 1.0.0.1119
I am torn between defending my kind and rolling on the floor laughing. I'll grudgingly hand it to you- great read, David.