Give Chance At Once Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Give Chance At Once

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Let us sing in humor
With pride and honor
Country should stand supreme
Show the light like sun’s beam

Not races should be given importance
Not cast should be encouraged at once
Even with slight pretext, it should be pushed back
No one should stake a claim or advocate

Country has been ruined
Not by cyclone or excessive rain
But by internal conflicts
And narrow interests

The flow is directed
In private pockets
Country is fooled
People are doomed

Poor become poorer
Rich get closer to power
All decisions are made in favor
Country is loosing flavor

Let us make it an exception
Give chance for cordial relation
Where people can feel as one
As country belongs to everyone

Wednesday, April 23, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 April 2014

Let us sing in humor With pride and honor

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Geetha Jayakumar 23 April 2014

Beautiful flow of lines. Where people can feel as one As country belongs to everyone.... Very true said every one should feel country belongs to them. Beautiful poem especially for todays scenario. Thank you Sir, for many inspiring comments for my poems.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 April 2014

Hasmukh Mehta welcome rajesh jaiswal ji 3 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 April 2014

JaiRam Tiwari Reality explained thro poem 8 hrs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 April 2014

Nancy Godfrey Like 23 Apr by Nancy Godfrey | Reply

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 April 2014

welcome mericel remirez 2 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 April 2014

United from within Tracy Bollinger4 minutes ago Internal conflict from within as destructive power exceeding that of nature. Give the true nature of man a chance, instead of the few bent on power. This may happen if enough people believe it can. I love the message that only a poet can deliver. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 April 2014

Boosted. KR BALAKRISHNAN8 minutes ago Mehtajiii, I am glad that your poems are becoming brighter and brighter day by day. Reaching greater heights.... Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 April 2014

interestng Stephen Kister9 minutes ago good idea

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 April 2014

Bravo~ I couldn't agree more! ! 23 Apr by Nancy Godfrey | Reply

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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