hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 66,573 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Give Go By - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

No more futile try
If that is sure
Look towards for better future

No friends stay
But go away
In crisis
This is simple thesis

Depend upon own capability
Use brain for correct utility
It must yield result
The future must be well built

Make foundation very strong
So it never goes wrong
Your feet are firmly placed
No weakness ever is traced

It is individual
Who acts not casual?
But with firm resolve
Determined to solve

It will be one time
You may miss sometime
But make sure once for all
You may seize it once given call

I would love to last
If not come first
But stay in race
If at I all I have to face


Comments about Give Go By by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 66,573 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/28/2013 9:38:00 AM)

    strong

    Michael E. Wiggs9 hours ago
    shows the determination to survive
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  • Gold Star - 66,573 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/28/2013 9:38:00 AM)

    Rachel Green9 hours ago
    This is a great poem. I absolutely love the line 'The future must be well built.'
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  • Gold Star - 66,573 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/28/2013 9:37:00 AM)

    Seema Tabassum Ali9 hours ago
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 28, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, August 28, 2013


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