Give Me Love Baby Give Me Love Poem by Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh

Give Me Love Baby Give Me Love



Give me love baby give me love
I am hungry for this sweet stuff
Only your love can change my life
I have been waiting for enough

Hurry hurry baby touch me now
Don't stand and stare at me like a cow

Please hold me tight baby kiss me please
Baby why don't you go for striptease?

Rock me heavy baby make me smile
Love me love me baby in your style

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eindaray Kyaw 16 September 2012

an enjoyable flow and strong emotion are what I can catch in your poem Really nice one Great job! ! ! !

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Maria C. Pires Costa 16 September 2012

Strong emotions in the realm of romantic love. It's a nice thread filled with a dynamic rhythm. Thanks for sharing it. All the best.

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Guy Lip-more 16 September 2012

Straight to the point, like it.

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Eric Cockrell 16 September 2012

it is the madness of love that rocks our world!

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 19 September 2012

I find this also very entertaining, dear Asif. I kept on smiling while reading. It seems that even if you seemed not to labor so much in composing your lines, and yet you are able to give a very nice effect. Thanks for sharing.

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Persian Khushi 17 September 2012

Wow Awesome writing sir.

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Kelvin Owusu 17 September 2012

this wasn't bad, written well

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Nurain Ali-balogun 17 September 2012

Love demanded for in a hurry... I hope it last longer dn it was hurried. Good poem.

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Terry O'leary 17 September 2012

Sometimes love's impatience can be trying... good poem... Terry

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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