Give Me Your Hand. Poem by Mahfooz Ali

Give Me Your Hand.

Rating: 4.5


I want to be child again,
would like to fly my kite (soul)
high and high,
like a free a bird
away from hatred.
Would like to touch everyone
with the magic wand of love,
which will mean end of war forever,
is it possible to create the world
of innocency?
Let's try with with the
tender touch.......
Come on,
Give me your hand.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naveed Akram 12 January 2008

A very succint poem, but short as well. I mean that kite and a soul has reached good height, all because of the shape of the poem, or the kite. Otherwise there are some words of commonality, and used in a typical manner, but a manner I am pleased with. I don't know what 'innocency' is? What is its difference to innocence? But at least I have flown a kite! Well done.

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Shiza Khan 12 January 2008

it's a nice poem abt peace love n harmony...i hope everyone gets the same message within thr hearts and make this world a happier place to live in. :)

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