Give Them Smile Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Give Them Smile

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I find many faces
Riddled with worrisome traces
Always burdened with tension
Not one or two cases can be mentioned

Life is mechanical
Happiness is never found even on arrival
It lacks real essence of joy
There is nothing much to enjoy

Such kinds of people are not stone
But something wrong has gone
They are made slave of circumstances
Only they need opportunity or chance

I would love to give them smile
From me by simple name
“Take it free by no compulsion”
But smile with no more confusion

This may give them some room
To remove all their gloom
It may bring back good shine
The nature may feel fine

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 December 2013

I find many faces Riddled with worrisome traces

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 December 2013

Smile and lift someone's sagging spirits! Philo FrancisLess than a minute ago Smile and light up the world..Smile and brighten someone's life! TQ for an amazing write! Comment 0 very nice flow and rhyming...

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 December 2013

Joan Pacinabo a.k.a. Wu Lang5 minutes ago well done! Comment 0 good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 December 2013

Anna Laurencio6 minutes ago good I would love to give them smile From me by simple name “Take it free by no compulsion”

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 December 2013

Not one or two cases can be mentioned WHAT DOES THE POET INTEND TO SAY HERE? Edward Wahbe5 minutes ago I would love to give them smile From me by simple name “Take it free by no compulsion” But smile with no more confusion This may give them some room THE POET OFFERS KIND WORDS OF CONSOLATION To remove all their gloom It may bring back good shine The nature may feel fine Comment +1 inspirational

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 December 2013

Connie Matthews Horinek1 minute ago I liked it

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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