elysabeth faslund

Rookie (11/23/49 / Thibodaux. Louisiana)

Glint Of The Broken - Poem by elysabeth faslund

In our severing
I toast with a shattered glass.
Always the laughter.

Comments about Glint Of The Broken by elysabeth faslund

  • Rookie David Desantis (5/5/2008 9:17:00 AM)

    nice! ! Funny, but at the same time sad...almost ironic i would say, and very clever. Plus you win pt's from me, as i often reference shattered glass in my poems...Great stuff in 3 lines! 10/10 (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 19 Points Emancipation Planz (5/1/2008 3:49:00 PM)

    and if any Merlot spills from the bottling line today... I shall think of you.... Salute! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 1, 2008

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 16, 2008

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