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Hasmukh Amathalal
(9/25/2009 11:47:00 PM) |
earth converges upon to a simple global village
drawing nearer and nearer to neighboring close
we conquer time and distance by science and space
let the love and peace be sole motto our intention...very honest desire and evrybody should strive hard to make it success... lovely imagination..i liked the idea....10
read mine message....welcome.... message
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Kassem Oude
(9/25/2009 7:08:00 AM) |
Such verses should belong to a great poet like you. A man owns great soul, we all are from the same mankind and we should treat each other in accordance with humanly values. mature poetry.
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Lily Law
(9/25/2009 2:51:00 AM) |
Just a word - WOW! ! ! !
May the peace and love be with us.
Thanks for sharing it.. It's worth to ponder on.
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Sarwar Chowdhury
(9/24/2009 12:31:00 PM) |
thought provoking! beautiful wording! finger towards truths!
10+
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Tsira Gogeshvili
(9/18/2009 12:15:00 PM) |
let the love and peace be sole motto our intention
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Subhendu, pleasantly for me your kind plan .... 10 x10
Best wishes,
Tsira
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Almedia Knight
(9/16/2009 5:26:00 PM) |
A great write with much truth. I like the last stanza-the world is a village.
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Saadat Tahir
(9/15/2009 2:06:00 AM) |
I largely agree with my friend Carl…..
However I would like to point out a flaw in the clubbing of Asian poets…
From India we also have our revered Dr Reshma Ramesh.. a master of short poetry…and we even have a gentleman who has invented ONEREYU… single word poems… we cud debate that separately.
Look at vidi, mamta, indira
There are top poets in asia who write very concise and crisp poetry…
Coming to this poem…yes a bit drawn out (I too am a culprit there) yet nice read…and has a definite theme
Keep it up dr cheers
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Catrina Heart
(9/15/2009 1:12:00 AM) |
You have brought me back in time and take me to ponder on about what we are now............Great written poem 10++++++++++++ Thanks!
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