Gloomy Poem by Naida Nepascua Supnet

Leaking Pen (Carlingford Australia ;) 9/20/2013 4: 42: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Dear Naida What a great poetic line, from your 'Gloomy' poem, life is not a bed or roses I am told, you captured life's struggles amazingly in your poem I enjoyed the economy in your lines, they drive the point without going overboard, less is more my new found cup of tea!

'I just see gloomy days I ignore happy ways Moon goddess in the sky Nowadays seems so shy' But the question is, WHY?

Glue Me Inspired by other peoples' gloom faded flame of Orange-Blue, the last candle in the room I bloom Like Sunflowers in the Moon When the Dead refuse the tomb Le Plume consume my every move Needles on my every groove When there's nothing left to prove Gloom is nothing but a Mood. I am the creator of it, I'm the Gloom that Angels covet Agony inside the stomach May they hate the way I love it Understand thy way Above it Like the Hand that rocks the puppet Even Gloom can be Inspiring. P.X 11-10-13 3: 57

Life is not perfect nor people, so live life as it is and make the most of it! Nice write though.

great poem naida powerfully written. full of sadness and emotion

Lovely expression of feelings...just beautiful. Loved reading it Naida. What is it that makes you so sad?

wow, you surpass yourself with every poem. keep on creating. loved it. :)