naida supnet

Rookie - 204 Points (bayambang, pangasinan, philippines)

GLOOMY


It's not fair it’s not right
Things I do seem not right
They just see things are wrong
Makes me sing a sad song

Then I see falling leaves
Then I sense hurting glares
I just feel cold rain drops
Feeling bad never stops

I don’t like working good
I just have dampen moods
Guitar strums are so sad
Each played tune sounds so bad

I just see gloomy days
I ignore happy ways
Moon goddess in the sky
Nowadays seems so shy

If they think I’m not good
My warm days are now cold
Feeling low not fired-up
Falling tears I can’t stop

Submitted: Wednesday, September 18, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, September 18, 2013

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  • Rookie - 1 Points Charles Monroe (11/10/2013 6:01:00 AM)

    Glue Me
    Inspired by other peoples' gloom
    faded flame of Orange-Blue,
    the last candle in the room
    I bloom
    Like Sunflowers in the Moon
    When the Dead refuse the tomb
    Le Plume consume my every move
    Needles on my every groove
    When there's nothing left to prove
    Gloom is nothing but a Mood.
    I am the creator of it,
    I'm the Gloom that Angels covet
    Agony inside the stomach
    May they hate the way I love it
    Understand thy way Above it
    Like the Hand that rocks the puppet
    Even Gloom can be Inspiring.
    P.X
    11-10-13
    3: 57 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points marvin brato (10/23/2013 4:53:00 AM)

    Life is not perfect nor people, so live life as it is and make the most of it! Nice write though. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 781 Points Thomas A Robinson (9/26/2013 5:29:00 PM)

    Has the seed fallen from the flower's bud.
    The petals to the air are gone
    At your feet dust and peat
    It just the new beginning
    do not weep, do not weep (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Deepak Sawhney (9/22/2013 1:12:00 PM)

    Lovely expression of feelings...just beautiful. Loved reading it Naida. What is it that makes you so sad? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 204 Points Naida Nepascua Supnet (9/20/2013 5:10:00 PM)

    Leaking Pen (Carlingford Australia ;)
    9/20/2013 4: 42: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)

    Dear Naida

    What a great poetic line, from your
    'Gloomy' poem, life is not a bed or roses I am told, you captured life's struggles amazingly in your poem
    I enjoyed the economy in your lines, they drive the point without going overboard, less is more my new found cup of tea! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 4,016 Points Khairul Ahsan (9/20/2013 4:33:00 AM)

    'I just see gloomy days
    I ignore happy ways
    Moon goddess in the sky
    Nowadays seems so shy'
    But the question is, WHY? (Report) Reply

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