Gloomy Verse Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

Gloomy Verse

Rating: 3.7


1.0 Alone

Alone and alone – you are alone
We are with you – you are alone
Sun and moon – like you alone
O my beloved – poet you alone

2.0 One-way Love

Scarlet dream walks like an ant
Someone can feel others blind
Someone is special others hide
One-way love always confined

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

moon and sun is alone. it is the fate of man who is abandoned by his beloved. nice. shan

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Lady Grace 30 May 2009

it's a very hard to be alone..grace

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Ency Bearis 30 May 2009

true to verses...gloomy being alone..well presented...

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Martine Kolber 30 May 2009

Well written! A 10, nothing more to say! Take care, Martine

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Alison Cassidy 30 May 2009

Thoughtful somber verse with a charcoal truth. Reminds me of Eeyore. 'And how are you today, Eeeyore? ' said Pooh brightly. 'Not very how'. said Eeyore gloomily. 'I haven't felt at all how now for a long time.' Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Darren Jkoeryo 22 January 2019

Lovely poem on loneliness.

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Aijaz Asif 04 June 2009

Alone and alone – you are alone We are with you – you are alone Sun and moon – like you alone O my beloved – poet you alone..... this one I can relate to myself or it is, I think so, : p....another beautiful and powerful write, in few lines the whole purpose of loneliness is defined and u did it very masterfully, in my thinking 'alone and alone' and 'One-way love' both are the same coz in both conditions you feel alone....thanks many 10'sssssssssssssssssss rgds asif

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Surya . 03 June 2009

sharp and crisp in conveying an idead, .beautifull. posted 10 love surya

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Brishti Mazumdar 03 June 2009

One-way love always confined How can you tell so many things in so few words? I have to learn it from you.Luv - Brishti

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Lady Grace 03 June 2009

aaalways to be alone is a sacrifice..grace

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