Glow Poem by Raveendran N.V.

Glow

Rating: 3.0


The sun flows through wedge
Among trees on the hill top.
The giant glow- worm.

The loss of dear ones
Between advaita and me;
Does living enthrall?

In your eyes for ever
A dropp of solitude smiles!
Wrinkles and grayness.

My thoughtfulness is
No source to your ‘sourcefulness’.
Moth mating with lamp.

Scattering thoughts, pain,
Your lifeless anxiety;
Cooing dove in nest.


Sadness plays a note;
My eyelids twitch and release
Perennial anguish.

Amidst all life gleams
When the sun glows in the east.
Nothingness doesn’t move.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tsira Goge 15 May 2008

It is a fine sincere picture, And the sun flows from yours a pray. ...10... Thanks for sharing, Raveendran... Kindest regards, Tsira

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Indira Babbellapati 10 July 2007

In your eyes for ever A dropp of solitude smiles! Wrinkles and grayness. simply loved these lines... i

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Melvina Germain 07 July 2007

A very descriptive write, I thououghly enjoyed it from start to finish.--Melvina--

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Sandra Fowler 05 July 2007

A very eloquent offering. But rather fatalistic as well. That decisive last line resonates. with the reader. Take care. As always, Sandra

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