Go On Praying Poem by Aftab Alam

Go On Praying

Rating: 4.8


Sat there, on the valley of flowers, a place
And there, a little far, a brook by the Lord's grace,
Colorful birds are preening with their beaks,
Captured, whole nature within, With folly kicks,

Closed the eyes and took a deep breath,
Fragrance in, nose that smelt the smell,
Auditory stimuli grasped the song with bell,
Brook fought with stones, witnessed by heath,

Calm and placid, everywhere, within and around me,
Ah! what a nature's painting! a joyous moment, seen, I see,
A calm breeze and the brook and the birds and the flowers,
Whispered, Pray! We all prayed; with heaven's showers,

While I knelt down, whispered ‘Glory to be Allah', thought
Came in mind; 'Death is for life', within us, heaven sprout'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sallam Yassin 14 May 2013

grace! few only can couch and paint with words this beauty of nature! great and I pray! !

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David Wood 15 May 2013

You paint a lovely picture with words Aftab. A lovely poem.

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Wahab Abdul 17 May 2013

a beautiful nature poem....lovely.. love it..

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Valsa George 17 May 2013

When surrounded by the beauty of Nature and a celestial peace is inhaled, we involunatarily think of God! ! An enjoyable read! !

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Neela Nath Das 16 May 2013

Very beautiful theme.You are pious.

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David Wood 15 May 2013

A lovely poem Aftab we should all pray.

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David Wood 15 May 2013

You paint a lovely picture with words Aftab. I like it.

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