Go On Smokin My Dear, But Don'T Say I Didn'T Warn You Poem by forever gone

Go On Smokin My Dear, But Don'T Say I Didn'T Warn You

Rating: 5.0


No.
This doesn't mean we can't be friends
It doesn't mean we can't hang,
Or go to the movies.
It doesn't mean
I won't love you.
But I tried to warn you,
I tried to get you to quit.
Now, I've done all I can.
It was your decision to make,
Your choice.
And you chose wrong.
You just don't get it,
What the consequences could be.
You could get cancer.
Spend your life In a hospital
While they stick those tubes
In your skin
Trying to make you better,
Cure you of this evil
desease.
You won't want to eat
You won't sleep
You will become skinny,
Frail and weak.
You could DIE..
but if you work a miracle,
If you get cured,
You will see your friends have abandoned you.
The ones who chose to stay,
They will look at you
With pity in their eyes,
They will see the new you.
Your structure,
Frail and weak.
Your going to do anything to get them back,
How it used to be.
You will do anythIng to be who you used to be.
Try to gain your weight back,
Do anything to stop you from being skinny, again.
Drugs become in option.
To keep you on your feet,
You will do anything.
I know you don't think that now.
You say there's no way drugs would be an option..
Not again. Never again.
You say that now, so did I.
I know you don't wanna go back to the drugs,
Back to the crash.
Neither did I.
But your going to do anything.
Just to stay upright.
Just don't you say you didn't know,
That you didn't know this could happen.
I warned you.
You won't want to look in the mirror anymore.
You won't think your pretty anymore
Even if you are.
If you have it once,
the chances go up.
You could go through it,
all over again.
Don't say I didn't warn you.
Don't say you didn't know.
I told you,
Loud and clear.
I did all I could.
Is it worth it?
Is smoking really worth,
Risking the consequences?
Just give it up
Don't ruin it,
Don't ruin the life youve got ahead of you.
Just give it up,
And it might just be okay.
I did all I could.
I'm sorry you wouldn't listen..
Just give it up,
And it might just be okay..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tai Chi Italy 01 July 2011

A smokin hot poem on one of the many risks in life, so many of us take! Givin up is so very hard to do. Incentive is essential imho smiling at you Tai

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 01 July 2011

Excellent poem with a very strong structure. Great sentiments and incredible imagery. Voted 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and vote my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Regards Akmal

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