Goa Poem by Pal Eternity

Goa

Rating: 5.0


I'm in this magnificent land of beaches,
Feeding my mind with a splendid,
Piece of peace,
Mixing chill and thrill,
High on life's smoothness,
Breeze flowing, Priceless! !
Breaking the boredoms bars,
Deep into mystery of stars,
Flickering flame and pondering on lifes game,
Having a grand gala time and typing a rhyme,
Smoking and drinking like a king.
The essence of indulgence,
Fun and break from the daily run.
Hoping several events,
Collecting in my mind crystal moments.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 06 May 2011

Nice poem. Very well conceived. Rich in imagery and style. Fine poetics. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box by typing the name of the poem if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.

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