God Picks Me Up Poem by Obed dela Cruz

God Picks Me Up

Rating: 4.0


For my God, family, and nation.

When I am down and am filled with troubles,
Torments, terrors, destruction, and rejection
People freely strikes my heart with verbal sword
I look up, close my eyes, quietly withdraw
Listen to nature’s sound, weep in silence.

Going to a great and deep battle
With enemies in front, rear, right, and left
Nowhere to escape, nothing to do but fight

When the battle blood reaches in the skies
Like eagle I lost my feathers and wings
I fall down, my body becomes tired

Suddenly, there’s Jesus who picks me up.
My heart jumps with joy, my eyes give tears of joy

God picks me up and washes all dirt and mud
He covers me in His warm great feathers
His arms comfortably embraces me
He calls me His son, I call Him FATHER.

He’s my life and my everything
At times, I am lost and fallen again
But He picks me up again and again

How I love the Supreme One forever

Copyright © 2009 by Obed Dela Cruz

(To use this poem in a legal way, you could email me in princeobed_dc@yahoo.com but of course, you cannot own the poem because it violates some of the law of informations systems and copyright)

(July 21,2009; Marikina City; 4: 50PM)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Isaac Maliya 08 August 2009

Yeah! God offers the ultimate protection even without us realising it.

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Vijay Menon 31 July 2009

its a very nice poem i liked it keep up your nice work 10+++

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June Feir-Cruz 27 July 2009

Well done, Obed. I'm originally from the Philippines. Do you have facebook? Look me up.

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Noel Horlanda 26 July 2009

Another show of faith in this piece of work. I'm working on the same theme but in different manner of thought. I do believed that when someone is down and was able to recover through his initiative, he was not alone, there was somebody who helped him back on his feet.Thanks...

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Wesley Mincin 24 July 2009

Although I do not see eye to eye with you as far as religious beliefs go, I do admire your passion for your God. I do admire your passion for the one you believe to be the Supreme Being. Therefore, I admire the passion that was etched into this poem for it is evident that you poured your soul into this. Well done, Obed.10/10

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