elizabeth griff

Rookie (20 / california)

God please


I knelt to my knees
and asked God for strength

I asked him for hope,
I asked him for faith,

I wept on the floor
begging him please
return my strength and sanity

Submitted: Saturday, November 21, 2009

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Christopher Is Dead (but I'm More Than Alive) (11/21/2009 2:43:00 PM)

    I've been in situations before where I've thought I can't move on, and I've offered myself up to God, and I have pulled through. I understand what you're conveying in this poem, I think, and I really like it. Short, yet it says so much. (Report) Reply

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