God's Breath Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

God's Breath



the door opened on it's own
'who is it' asked the mom from the kitchen
'it is the wind mom' said the child to the mom
not waiting for a permission
the wind would come in
pushing the door open
who could stop it
'am not a guest' it would say
The wind is....
GOD'S BREATH
mine too

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Priyanka Bhowmick 30 May 2009

well mentioned the wind as God's breath.. nice piece.

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Carol Gall 30 May 2009

wind - Gods breath simply wondeful

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Ramesh T A 31 May 2009

A thoughtful poem of God enlightens mind!

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Naidz Ladia 31 May 2009

the wind is a god's breath.it expresses the elemental value of the wind..naizz

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Eyan Desir 30 May 2009

Good write....... Keep touching lives poet

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Rajaram Ramachandran 30 May 2009

Wind is our friend. God's breath is our breath too

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Indira Renganathan 30 May 2009

A common subject on a different notion with a good title..well said SL...congrats

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