Tribhawan Kaul

Rookie - 558 Points (01-01-1946 / Srinagar (J & K) India)

God's Wrath - Poem by Tribhawan Kaul

HIS benevolence knows no boundaries
but incomprehensible is God’s wrath
thinks not twice while taking away all
forewarning always never to cross HIS path
but none heeds and who cares
nailed to cross one who dares
“never blame me, ” thunders HE
blame the elements
wrecking the havoc
humans invited the wrath
what a pity!
Raping the nature’s generosity.
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Poet's Notes about The Poem

Devastating cloud bursts and subsequent ravaging floods killing approx.10,000 and erasing villages after villages of Utrakhand/India made me write this poem. Who is actually responsible?

Comments about God's Wrath by Tribhawan Kaul

  • Rookie Chandana Khan (7/21/2013 9:43:00 PM)

    God save us from His wrath,
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  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (7/12/2013 4:09:00 PM)

    God has already answered evil, it is we who are scared. Who will give his own flesh to save another is as a god. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,433 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (7/9/2013 2:09:00 AM)

    A wondrful poem representin God's fury as d rape of nature like rapacity wastin. Kudos! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,555 Points Wahab Abdul (7/3/2013 9:05:00 PM)

    a poem with great wisdom..a social poem with a warning not play rough with nature, .. a very good poem..i liked it... (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 728 Points Shahzia Batool (7/2/2013 4:06:00 AM)

    who is actually responsible, the culprit is not difficult to find... we commit presumption...we are the SO WHATTERS, we take things light which ought to be taken seriously, we do not feel fear, we are audacious, never think never to cross His path...and Nature demonstrates when that Divine wrath is provoked...storms are not devastating...it's we....
    not a poem but a mirror! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 20,480 Points Valsa George (7/1/2013 11:24:00 PM)

    Most of our miseries are man made and there is no point in blaming God! He created a beautiful world for man to inhabit, but man's excessive greed and thoughtlessness for the posterity bring upon us untold miseries! A great write! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 31,466 Points Gajanan Mishra (7/1/2013 2:31:00 AM)

    raping the nature's generosity. thanks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, July 1, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 25, 2013


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