Going To My Head Poem by Elna Nel

Going To My Head

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once more I'll hug
the tips of my fingers
to your chin
in a close dance
clay against clay
with sole skin
separating us
desperate for contact
with your exasperating
ambiguity
I'll say it well
with naked hands
a cheekbone high
a lip an eye
contours of loveliness
on a tender trip
with a thumb and my eye
will I love you mold you
drum into you dimples
of interest with the many
roads of my mind
for I've decided
that I need you now

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
for the love of pottery, in making a head
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elena Sandu 08 June 2012

Beautiful choice of words, loved this poem, thank you for share!

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Pheko Motaung 08 June 2012

A beautiful poem! Yuh's a gifted melodious fabulous word smith! Good luck to you

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