Golden Heart Poem by susette varga

Golden Heart

Rating: 4.9


Her golden heart weeps
The depths of despair
Feeling so lonely
He is not near

His hearts turned to granite
Harder then brick
Nothing can penetrate
Not the hardest kick

Happiness eludes her
She has given up hope
Worthless and broken
All over a bloke

However he's happy
Now that she's gone
He no longer suffers
Her droning on

The difference between them
Is very vast
One day she'll be thankful
He is part of her past

Thursday, January 11, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: heartache
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 11 January 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Susette. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Akhtar Jawad 11 January 2018

A beautiful poem on heartache, the poetess has thoughts and I hope soon she will be a lovely poetess.

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Invisible One I Am Not Here 11 January 2018

Thanks for your lovely comments... new to this hahahah so means a lot xx

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Frank Adie 14 January 2018

Great insight. You are an eagle, sour!

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Invisible One I Am Not Here 14 January 2018

Thanks Frank comment is appreciated x

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Luz Hanaii 23 April 2019

I guess opposites attract, if for nothing else, at least for learning. We learn to love and value ourselves.

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Dr Antony Theodore 11 August 2018

The difference between them Is very vast One day she'll be thankful He is part of her past...experiences of love, faithfullness in love and relationship.. although she suffers now, later she will be happy. so true. it is the experience of many with such a heartbreak.. thank u for pointing to such love matters.. thank u. again. tony

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Riza Braholli 03 July 2018

a sweet poem. a broken hurt... However he's happy Now that she's gone He no longer suffers Her droning on but. congrats. dr. Riza

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alan brown 02 April 2018

A broken heart 💔 soon turns to stone. Enjoyed reading your poem Sussette Alan

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White Tiger 08 March 2018

Very sassy write Loved it Susette. Thank you for sharing

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