Golden Mean Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Golden Mean

Rating: 5.0


Greed, pride, envy, dishonesty and lust
Contentment, modesty, honesty and trust
All are good in their own place
Golden mean is the life's base

(2008/6/16)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M M 16 June 2008

Very interesting combination of what seems contraries at first sight... Deep poem... The contraction of the thought through few lines creates, as usual in your poems, an intensified effect. 10

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3mvi 3mvi 16 June 2008

Deep constructive poem...thanks for sharing.

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Tsira Goge 27 September 2008

But only some can find this precious middle...10... Tsira

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... ... 17 June 2008

Bravo! ! ! Nice nice nice! ! !

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Thad Wilk 16 June 2008

Ahh powerful and well executed Shiraz! A pleasure to read indeed! ! *10*! ! Best regards, Friend Thad

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Rani Turton 16 June 2008

Finding the mean is what is difficult for so many...thanks so much for this poem and its wisdom.

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Lynda Robson 16 June 2008

Each emotion you mention here has as you say it's place in life, a very deep profound write, well penned, Lynda xx

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