Golden Words Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Golden Words

Rating: 4.9


As word suggest golden,
brightness always retained,
even buried underground,
It’s inherence never detained,

So the words beautifully chosen,
carefully selected and weighed,
may retain sweetness,
even lost for a while,

Friendship from a friend,
with chosen word,
touches heart bare,
only to find place in it,

It will never cost more,
Wicked may do it more often,
Just to cheat a noble soul,
Only to loose it once again,

Do grief over not a words,
for words are just a gimmick,
played for safety and skill,
Just to say it is fun and comic,

I may not fall to prey,
Again to loose golden place,
Wicked I may have the design,
but with all good intention,

May I wish all happiness,
in her life to come,
let all black clouds disappear,
let my Roshan get better shine,

Gold may loose charm again,
silver lines may disappear,
let friends go in oblivion,
but friendship not in vain,


Curse not luck and fate,
All are but same side of coin,
one side may be dark,
other side may be 'Roshan' or bright

Both sides stand equal to me,
What is dark or what is bright,
If both are to be there,
let bright be with her,

I shall carry with black,
hope to find golden rays,
when fall on golden coin,
inscribed words may shine and speak

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Umesh Lalvani 12 August 2009

they are in adviseory forms....10

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Lalvani Rekha 13 August 2009

they are just golden advices///10

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Shilpa Maheswari 14 August 2009

good words are always golden...10

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Vijay Suwarnkar 15 August 2009

it is ncie to read such good poem....10

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Indani Narayan 16 August 2009

they are considered as valuable words....10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 06 October 2009

fine phrasology! beautifully detailed! 10+

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Sachin Goswami 01 October 2009

So the words beautifully chosen, carefully selected and weighed, may retain sweetness, even lost for a while,

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Severina Dsouza 17 September 2009

As word suggest golden, brightness always retained, even buried underground, It’s inherence never detained,

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Ketan Rajgor 11 September 2009

Friendship from a friend, with chosen word, touches heart bare, only to find place in it,

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Darshna Chopra 04 September 2009

So the words beautifully chosen, carefully selected and weighed, may retain sweetness, even lost for a while, ....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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