Goldilocks Tale Poem by Harley White

Goldilocks Tale

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Once upon a distant star
way away from where we are
sentient beings from afar
told a tale in their memoir.

Having ruined their own home,
they set out through space to roam
over tides of cosmic foam
leaving their celestial dome

for a new pristine abode
where clear liquid water flowed,
with a built-in ethics code
in this novel episode,

thus to avert disaster
and avarice to master,
seeking harmony vaster
and peace agreements faster.

A star's luminosity,
apparent ferocity
or globe's grandiosity
to aid reciprocity

of living things emerging,
influential converging
for evolution surging
via natural urging

were some ingredients prime,
plus an agreeable clime,
that served as reason and rhyme
to detect a place in time.

Finding it was quite a feat!
They encountered one replete
with air to breathe, food to eat,
winter chill, and summer heat…

There in the Goldilocks zone,
though some aspects were unknown,
it felt right, that one alone.
All the qualities were shown

to be livable it seemed,
more so than they'd ever dreamed.
Sunshine o'er the landscape beamed.
Rivulets of rainfall streamed.

Neither torrid nor too cold,
not too youngish nor too old,
nights of silver, days of gold,
lit with radiance untold,

lands of plenty, sea to sea,
circumstellar to a T—
this would suit them perfectly.
What a haven it could be!

They might call this planet Earth.
It would prove its precious worth
as a globe devoid of dearth
where they'd have a true rebirth…

So the mortals settled in
with their tribal kith and kin
their adventure to begin,
standing firm through thick and thin.

Did they behave corruptly?
Their story stops abruptly—

unless there's another end,
which those earthlings later penned,
when they'd waked to comprehend
that their faults they could amend

plus troublesome woes transcend
and enlightened truth befriend…

Well, anyway, let's pretend!

Goldilocks Tale
Monday, November 14, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: human condition
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
"Goldilocks zone"

The Habitable Zone
https: //www.e-education.psu.edu/astro801/content/l12_p4.html

Earth…
http: //www.bbc.co.uk/science/space/solarsystem/sun_and_planets/earth

Habitable Zones…
http: //www.bbc.co.uk/science/space/universe/sights/habitable_zones

Circumstellar habitable zone
https: //en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Circumstellar_habitable_zone

Goldilocks and the Three Bears
https: //en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Goldilocks_and_the_Three_Bears

What is the Goldilocks Zone and why does it matter in the search for ET?
http: //www.abc.net.au/news/2016-02-22/goldilocks-zones-habitable-zone-astrobiology-exoplanets/6907836

"Goldilocks and the Three Bears" ~ version of the fairy tale…
http: //www.surlalunefairytales.com/goldilocks/index.html

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Illustration ~ "Story of Golden Locks" c.1870 by Seymour Joseph Guy [1824-1910] ~ Oil on canvas ~ The Met, NY

http: //www.metmuseum.org/exhibitions/listings/2016/printing-a-childs-world

The painting and details (including the book) can be seen (or by zooming in) here…
https: //www.flickr.com/photos/eoskins/20975372170/in/photostream/
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bill Cantrell 18 February 2019

Also, I think the picture is magically enchanting

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Harley White 18 February 2019

Yes, the picture was a fortunate find for me.

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Bill Cantrell 17 February 2019

You had me in circles until the last line! ! Every turn in life could be a Goldilocks story...interstellar Forrest mash inhabitable by whatever anomaly preventing a good bowl of heavenly porridge...as always, I am forever intrigued by your poetry! !

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Harley White 18 February 2019

Oh my, your fantasies really took off with this poem… how wonderful! And thank you so much for your continuing interest in my poems!

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