Gone Poem by Elisabeth Wingle

Gone

Rating: 4.6


I will not scream
I will not cry
I feel sick
I think I'll die
Now he's left,
He's gone for good
Is that bad?
Or as it should?
Anyway
I must go on
Must remember
He is gone
Gone

Sunday, October 25, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: break up,loneliness,love,love lost
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 31 October 2015

Short and sweet, it flows so smooth. Liked it.

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Elisabeth Wingle 31 October 2015

Thank you

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Hazel Durham 01 November 2015

Beautifully written poem with intense and deep emotions so powerfully brought out with a lovely style!

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Elisabeth Wingle 01 November 2015

Thank you Hazel, I am honored that you took the time to read some of my poems.

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Julie Smith 04 August 2016

Wow sums up what I went through in April. Though I learned the bad thing was in fact kind of good for something. Nicely written, touching and to the point :)

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Elisabeth Wingle 29 July 2016

Thanks you Judith it was a long time ago, but it was definitely written From the heart

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Bri Edwards 19 May 2016

But obviously not forgotten. Nice one. BRI :) Wes sent me a note. I am not sure I have EVER banned anyone (other than wives) . Try again! (WE never got married, DID we? ?

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Elisabeth Wingle 19 May 2016

Ok I'll try it again.. I am pretty sure we never married. There are a handfull of nights in my youth that are a little fuzzy....... You didn't spend any time in Cleveland in the early 80s?

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Wayne Kingston 03 March 2016

Like it...well said...experience revealed. Keep writing'!

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Wes Vogler 07 January 2016

Good time to take up Sudoku I recommend diagonal moyen (middle) absorbing and comforting. Then of course there is vanilla ice cream. You express yourself well. ta

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