I take a hammer and use it excessively
On a plate of reality, the plate gets fragmented
The fragmentation is an illusion
And i am trapped in it
As the universe is an indivisible whole
Everything is interconnected
Nothing exists separately including good and bad
And the hammer is nothing but my thought
The agent which defines the movement
Of thought and meaning,
And takes things and situations in isolation
Actually though they are not.
concrete images are used for abstract suggestions...good work!
i really like the idea of hammer and plate....you hv written it so brilliantly. really good poem.... :)
hammer is nothing but my thought Universe is one indivisible entity. Beautifully stated. Thank you.
Nothing exists separately including good and bad And the hammer is nothing but my thought........beautiful lines. A philosophical poem. Very nice.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A great philosophical poem. We can always be good if we try. Nice to read yor poem again.