hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 33,815 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Good Flavor - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Sleepless nights
Make you to fight
For challenges next day
With sun’s first ray

Tension rules supreme
Thoughts invade from within
You find no way out
It rolls with chain of thoughts

Night must remain calm
To cause no more harm
And allow freshness
With brightness on face

Sleep in enough quantity
May improve your capability
Fresh mind with strong approach
Is to yield result as such

Work hard day time
Carry no tension at home
Relax if possible with children
Let children remain on your back and be driven

Change is must
Be little honest
In approach and behavior
You may smile and leave behind good flavor


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  • Gold Star - 33,815 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/22/2013 11:24:00 AM)

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 22, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, August 23, 2013


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