Good Lien Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Good Lien



Why do I not feel part?
And wants to depart
From this selfish world
Even if I am not told

I find reasonably good
Attitude from neighborhood
They follow their own religion
I too have good lien

I pick no quarrels
But that does not go well
The conflict becomes some what large
Its darkness can not be put on page

We all worship almighty
For peace and prosperity
But why do we go blind?
When some one tries to be unkind?

Why do we try to claim?
Superiority in terms and blame
Is the faith not strong?
That can stop us from going wrong?

Thursday, August 21, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2014

Why do I not feel part? And wants to depart

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2014

Nice flow and message. karl stuber5 minutes ago This says to me Let's set aside our differences and discover success through co-operation.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2014

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 August 2014

welcome Ligaw Makata Just now · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2014

i like it Joseph Groome12 minutes ago sorry for crappy feedback but its a good poem. Keep up he good work!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2014

food for thought Malady Johnson12 minutes ago this is something deep Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2014

I don't like it Matthew Thurman14 minutes ago I don't like it

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2014

best poem Bong Herbert Guitang14 minutes ago Great piece Comment +1

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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