Good Notion Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

Good Notion



Black and white hues defined life
in variable degree either joy or strife
fate is unpredictable so are our dreams
like water from rains cascading into streams
becomes a river flows to the ocean of emotion
exciting tears of joy or sadness depend on notion.

Time comes when existence is filled with burden
it make us melancholic and our feelings are sadden
discouragement overcomes us becoming pessimistic
that we start to feel useless, empty and not optimistic
as such life for us becomes darkness like a chaotic prison
a dead end when anger and self pity dominates our notion.

Yet even in total darkness there is an ember of hope
when the heart still beats in rhythm with a life to cope
then the mind lit the conscience of wisdom with an insight
and with prayer God will enlightened our soul with foresight
then illuminates the darkness in us into bright colored rainbow
like newborns we're alive again so letting go of is a good notion.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 11 January 2014

The poem that have many values to appreciate and the value that i like most is inside this lines.. Time comes when existence is filled with burden it make us melancholic and our feelings are sadden discouragement overcomes us becoming pessimistic that we start to feel useless, empty and not optimistic ...later you bring lot of life scenario..and tell that how we still can win in life challenge..nice one! _Soul

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Dinesan Madathil 11 January 2014

A poem that instills hope and optimism and this notion you have advocated for is universally a fact that works on the minds and the human stocks. A fine sharing Marvin Brato.

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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