Good Sex Poem by jackilton peachum

Good Sex

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A man derives nothing from sex-
the woman's pleasure is what we seek.
For the female
(here I hazard a guess) ,
its a long climb up the mountain hoping to reach a peak-
for the man,
a wild bumpy ride downhill in a runaway wagon,
and a prayer we won't fall out!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ekaterina M. Polischuk 10 March 2012

nice unusual poem... i like your free issue and the way you tell about that.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 07 June 2019

A man derives nothing from - abs incorrect jay pee saves ur hands to ejack as in masturbashun ok correct spelling to tion be happy u do release @70

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Chinedu Dike 01 July 2018

Well conceived and elegantly crafted with artistic brilliance. An insightful rendition of words. Thanks for sharing Jack.

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Jemima Rivas 20 May 2016

I think this poem is very creative but very sketchy... Women only do it for the man's pleasure for him to invade see everything feel everything and feel empowered. This poem is a bit biased needed more research

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Dr Antony Theodore 19 May 2016

its a long climb up the mountain hoping to reach a peak- for the man, .. a very good poem well developed.... thank you.tony

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Patti Masterman 05 August 2012

Ha, you've captured it so perfectly, and I dare not add anything else to this comment! ;)

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