Goodbye Poem by Resa Lynn

Goodbye

Rating: 5.0


screaming in my face
yelling at me
will never change how feel
I'll alway love you
and I'll always be there for you
but knowing that you don't care
just makes me cry through the night
knowing all those days we spent together
hand in hand
and now thats just a memory and u no longer care
all you wanted to do was to break my heart
goodbye forever
i love you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chigemezi Nnadozie Wogu 04 January 2010

Good poem. It has good emotinal background.

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 04 January 2010

Vividly intense and heart rending pain conveyed in this poem. Well Written piece! (I would like to invite you to view my poem 'I Must Have Swallowed the Key' -it sort of plays part two to this.) 10+++++

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Romeo Della Valle 03 January 2010

Resa, only time shall tell, later on, you would look at yourself on a mirror and no longer see a distorted image, and you will laugh and say to yourself 'I was a fool', everything then will be cool....well penned, great, keep it up! 10+++

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