Goodbye Poem by THEODOROS MANTAS

Goodbye

Rating: 5.0


I close every door behind
and I sit on the cold floor
with my mind's dark side
and through the window
of my wounded soul
I see a tired blue sky
and I don't know
what to think anymore
I just want to say goodbye.

Tuesday, August 21, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: despair
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 21 August 2018

Write comment. Good start, Theodoros. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Evi Prinou 17 June 2019

Just opεn a new door......🌸 θα πρόσθετα εγώ! !

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Evi Prinou 17 June 2019

Just oprn a new door......🌸 θα πρόσθετα εγώ! !

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Mary Skarpathiotaki 09 September 2018

Very good poemservice bravo! 10+++++++++++++++++++

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 August 2018

through the window of my wounded soul I see a tired blue sky....despair expressed soo well.. wonderful imagination of the tired sky and the closed doors and the window view.. write more you have great power to imagine......... thank u. tony

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Naila Rais 21 August 2018

A nice write.... Keep it up...10...you may like to read my poems too... Naila

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