Treasure Island

Andrew Lee


Goodmorning


The plane of my life used to fly so smooth
You came aboard and the higher I flew.
You took me to places I'd never been before,
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Hi guys. Please feel free to give feedback on this poem, ways to improve my writing, etc. Thanks!

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  • Anthony Di''anno (3/23/2013 7:19:00 AM)

    Hi Andrew,

    I enjoyed your poem. I don't see much wrong with it. The only advice I would offer is that maybe it could be improved through sticking to the plane metaphor and expanding on that. However I liked the mention of the world being your lamb chop. Was it an airline meal?
    Try to just let your words flow from your heart and it will all come together. You obviously have a talent for writing poetry. Keep at it. (Report) Reply

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